Feedback On Magazine

The feedback i got was i need to change the layout of my contents page, use different kinds of fonts that stand out and get the readers attention as well as using differnt colours on the page as at the moment it looks very simple and boring. Also she said i need to think about the places i take my pictures for my magazine and the clothing im going to use as i need more than one outfit for my models, facial expressions are another thing i really need to think about as their faces need to be blank but need to work on how i can best show it in the faces. She said i need to use a bigger bolder font on the double spread so the heading stands out, using a quote or somethign different to my magazines name, also editing my picture on the double spread to make it blend in better and stand out by using brighter colours. The font for my bands name on the front cover needs to be in a different font and colour to stand out and changing my lay out as its really plain at the moment and it needs to be eye catching for the reader which it isnt doing at the moment she said.

• Take more pictures in different places
• Use mutlituple clothing for the models
• Use more colour on all pages
• Change the font for the bands name
• Changed the layout of contents, look more messy and over the place
• Change double spread heading to a quote
• Make text box's all the same size (might need to delete some information)
• edit photos

By listening to this feedback it has opened my eyes to a lot of things i need to change to make my magazine to make it look better and stand out more as well as fitting the type of genre im doing. i need to do a lot of work as i want to change quite a bit mainly the layout of my magazine which ill do by positioning the text boxes in different places on the page also making them smaller and deleting some information or adding. I want to changed the colours im using for the text and pitcures which ill do by sticking to the scheme of colour im going for but by adding more to the pages so it stands out. I want to get as many pictures i can and make them all different and see which ones i like the most by spending a lot of time on it getting the lighting and background right to how i want it on my magazine, so i can play around with it till i get it perfect by using the photo shop editing too. The cover needs more information which ill lay out differently on the page to fit the genre im doing aslo using brighter colours in the picture by editing and playing around with lights and props when taking pictures, so it gets the readers attention as its the first page theyll see when looking at the magazine.